House on Haunted HillHouse on Haunted Hill (1999)

IMDB rating: 5.10

Plot: When an eccentric millionaire offer a group of opposites $1,000,000 to spend the night in a so called “Haunted House” with a murderous past, they figure it is a quick way to get quick money and leave. All of them are sure it is some made up story just to mess with their heads a little and test their courage. But, once they stay in the house they start to think about the mistake they made in coming there when mysterious things start to happen.

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Directors: Malone William

Actors: Rush Geoffrey,Kattan Chris,Diggs Taye,Gallagher Peter,Perlich Max,Combs Jeffrey,Beebe Dick,Marsters James,Horror,Thriller,

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Is this story worthy of revising? I wrote it in grade 6, how can I make it better? (I'm in grade 9 now)?
In the upper regions of British Columbia there is a small town called Angels Keep. It’s isolated from all other cities and towns separated by large mountains and vast forests of aspens it takes approximately 4 hours to drive to Angels Keep from the nearest town and that